THOSE DAYS ..
(Foreward : This is only my 2nd Accomplished Poem …. Naturally it is charactarised by Childish Rhyme scheme (abab) mostly….This can be taken as a hinderance….Because the content of this Poetry is Real and is Very close to my heart….My ol’ friends n Relatives would really swear by it ….Put in Simple Words…. This is the Story of my life and the Environment around it till I was in School (Left 5 years back) ….btw …those who still don’t know me will surely get to know post the next few lines …)
From the Time I was born …
Don’t quite remember the Day after Each Dawn …
But Somethings are there I want to Share…
So keep on
I was a Toddler then and was Developing each day..
Don’t rememember how I looked then …but my Photos say…
Was Fat, was Plump, was Round n Awesome ..
..But now when when the Mirror tells me what I’ve become ..
I just sit and think ..Those Days are gone ..Those Days are Gone ..
I grew up a little more ..
Playing Cars was my daily chore ..
I remember my 3rd Birthday ..
When a “Car Shaped” cake was cut on a Tray ..
Can recount all the Relatives who were present to Shower their Blessing..
But could I have waited for anything but the “Presents” they would bring !!!
…Even now on my Birthday I do wait…then realise …then say …
Those Days are gone…aah !! Those days are gone ..
It was an age-old Garden where visits I used to make ..
See-sawing, swinging, sliding and toy-train rides with buddies I used to undertake ..
Every Saturday among us friends would generate a certain Fervour …
When each one’s tongue would imagine the Particular Flavour ..
..of the lick of those delicious Ice-creams we used to die for ..
Simultaneously taking a Horse – Ride, making us Hyper …
…Now I pass that place and see a Highrise Uplifted..
And I often hit my head …to understand ..
Those Days are gone …Yes They are Gone …
It was the Day when I learnt to Ride the Bicycle ..
Went to a ground and pedalled my lungs out in large circles…
But when I suddenly fell off, the skin took all the Beat ..
But the memory of that day would always remain so .. sweet ..
… no matter I no more ride a Bicycle ..
But now whenever I Trip, or Fall, or Stumble …
My mind races back ..then realizes .. then I mumble ..
Those Days are gone ..Those Days are gone ..
In Primary School I had an Impression ..
Was Honest & Outstanding without mention ..
Was a Scholar, Orator, Monitor all along ..
Reputation above all could have never been so .. strong ..
Distinctive, Meritorious, Idealistic all rounder I were ..
…But don’t know why Now my Marksheets just read FAILURE, POOR, STRUGGLER ..Oh Dear !!
Frustration among all then tries to Tear my Hair ..
But then I remember ..Those Days are Gone ..they are no more there ..
High School was Dynamic, Energy my Fuel ..
Enthusiasm, Chirpyness mixed with Confusion would Rule ..
Was still an Orator, a Quick Learner and a talented Cricketer ..
Now Extracurriculars I used to Excel ..But class got another new Topper ..
There was a phase of Insult, Embarassment, Perplexion, Compulsion ..
But all Laid to rest when “Friendly Banter” was the bastion ..
All the Excuses, Artificial Sneezes and the Countless LOL moments ..
Can’t still Forget the ‘Last Day’ , when Tears were all the Cheeks felt ..
OH PLEASE !! Don’t make me Remember those Days ….
But Can anyone atleast make me Understand WHY ???
THOSE DAYS ARE GONE …THOSE DAYS ARE Dead, Buried and Really gone ..
- PB / SpunKo
good one , just would like to say something abt the rhyme scheme .Someone told me that we should never bother about the rhyme scheme , the fact that the things in our head pass through our hands and into the page is the essence of the poem :)
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ReplyDeleteA good one..
ReplyDeleteBut I feel this poem is incomplete..
I wanted to read more after
"OH PLEASE !! Don’t make me Remember those Days "
Are you planning any sequel to it..??
@Ajay ...well said ....thnx...
ReplyDelete@Abhi ...u have just entered the World of SpunKo ...now U'll get to know Nothing is Complete in my case ..... I believe more in incomplete Endings....But from my Perspective this one had been written as a Complete poem in my mind....thnx for reading...
Spunkomaniac...
ReplyDeleteI must say you area outstanding poet ...awesome stuff ...everyone will relate to your poem ,as i feel everyone goes through this stages ...i still am waiting for something very very positive from you ....somehow though everything you write is stupendous ,but i wanna see more hope in whatever you write and you actually feel...make use of your time now enjoy and get going ...otherwise like me when you will be 30 , you will gain write a poem and say "THOSE DAYS ARE GONE ...THOSE DAYS ARE GONE ...and noone will have an answer to your WHY ...NOONE HAS THE ANSWER TO THEIR QUESTIONS :))
i agree with ajay ! and this poem is your heart , i feel ! too good marvellous thoughts comin in your mind ! gr8 memories ! it actually takes us back into those times ! ahh ! really those days are gone ! but hey , i would like to bring to your kind notice that , we can glorify those days , we can remember them and njoy now also ! tthey are just evergreen , and you proved this very point through your poem , proud of you ! hats off !!! all the best ! and pb do write poems ! you rock as usual !!!
ReplyDeleteDada .....Thanks a lot for ur appreciation ....Yeah Dunno when I'll write a Positive one...But this one was totally From the Heart...n it was all True...About me....Those Days are Really Gone ....
ReplyDeleteBut I wish I can again say in the Future "Damn THose Days ...Life Here I come !!!" ..But for that m still Waiting....
@Poet (Prajkta) ....Thank u for not completely Scrapping my poem...U r a Professional ...m just a 2 poem Wonder (Self titled)...lol
ReplyDeleteI actually Wrote it in about an Hour and a Half ...
It was Just a flashback of an Old Incident that Spurred me into starting this poem and Suddenly 3 pages were filled without notice....
Its simply My life till 10th Std ....
But the Only thing I disagree is "We must Glorify our past " ..i dont believe it ...It just hurts to see ur past when ur struggling at present..hehe ...
Thanks for Reading n your views ....keep reading....