Thursday, January 6, 2011

MY FIRST LOVE ...

MY FIRST LOVE


[Foreward : Finally I’m 5 poems old… So no more excuses from my side and no more pleas of ‘Going easy’ on me … It’s a Totally Unconventional poem …

Read and let me know through your comments whether you hate it or Totally hate it {There is an overdose of LOVE in this poem itself} …Enjoy!!!]

Its 05/01/2011 ….. Rewind <<<<<<<<>>>> Stop … Play …

Now its **/**/2007 … Lets Start …



I opened the Door, sat in the Driver’s seat

Heart beats bursting, but Morale upbeat.

Turned on the Ignition, Fuel rushed through my Vein

No wonder I Drove for the first time, I went Insane

Adrenaline pumping within made 30kmph feel like Formula 1

Even though have weak memory, remember Sure did I this one .


When was Young, like others had an Ambition

Surely had my mind on something, It was a delicious Attraction

“I want to be a Driver !! ”,declared I to my parents

Laugh they did, not knowing that I was Hell bent

Hot Wheels, Maisto were the brands I would swear of

As Birthday gifts, only 4 wheelers I would approve of

Was a Fanatic, fantasy was my Injection

Never did I know that I would grow up loving the word “Traction”


You would ask me, ”What the hell are you writing about ???”

“The Title is inappropriate !!! ” You would by now shout

I’d say ,”Wait !! Have patience, got to say a thing…

This is a Love Story indeed, have a lot more to Sing …”

So let me now bring you right to the centre of this Topic

I would now talk about ‘Her’, to give you a Kick .


Red was the color I identified 'her' by

In or outside the “Tube”, ”She’s Marvellous !!”, I’d cry

My jaw dropped and remained still the First time I saw Her

I am Blushing now, as the image of that day flashes so clear

In front of my eyes, there 'she' elegantly stood

Graceful, Beautiful and Wonderful, 'she' made my mood

Never had seen such a wonderful thing before

Spent sleepless nights imagining Her and ‘Me’ by the Sea shore


You would not believe when I put straight this fact

I was just 7 years old when ‘she’ did Attract

“Naughty” would be the only word that would surely spring up in your mind

I swear ,”I was Innocent !!! ”, but ‘she’ was all my eyes could find.


But then there was one sad thing that I had to Understand

She was on the other side of the TV doing things Grand

As I started to grow up, her distance made me Sick

Crush was all she had become, was it a Flattering trick ???

I still had not met her, but our Bond was still Discrete

Year after year she was getting famous, but still remained soooo sweet …

One thing I must mention, her façade was always Constant

She always wore Red, since I was 7 till I was at my 18th year’s end



Now there is no point keeping you engaged in this Riddle

Wouldn’t you ask me, who ‘Miss Red’ was ??? ‘cause I can see your Fingers fiddle

Okay, OK, I’ll disclose whom I was talking all about

It was the “ SCUDERIA FERRARI Formula 1 CAR” , unlike you might have surely thought !!!


Now please don’t bang your head on the nearest wall

I would thank you for your Patience and Bravery after all !!


I’m now big enough, and surely know what LOVE means

But still if someone asks me about MY FIRST LOVE,

FERRARI” for Sure, I would scream !!!


- PB / SpunKo

9 comments:

  1. hey its awesome man every line seems interesting and want to be keep reading

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  2. @Parth ....Thanx a lot buddy ...
    I tried my hand at an Unconventional style of Writing ...m not as experienced as u in terms of Poems ...but m relieved that you liked it ...
    keep following ...

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  3. good poem as always..
    This one was just a normal one..
    "I think" a casual one..
    The moment you mentioned the red color, the whole idea was clear in my mind..
    And why do you expect your readers to bang their head in every post ??

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  4. @Abhijit ...right ...nice insight ....
    yeah it was a casual one ..i just wrote it in leisure for my love of Writing ....I actually completed it in one go in about 45mins...
    btw I m a fan of headbanging music ...thus want my readers too to bang their heads ...lol
    keep reading ...new article coming soon ...stay tuned to my blog ...

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  5. hey nice one bua ...keep going conventional or unconvetional i love ur writing style ..keep writing ...enjoy :))

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  6. to tell u a fact, being ur sis i knw wat this word 'LOVE'means 2 u... ur ideas r just class apart... After reading ur poems n articles my head rises high in pride n m sure tat u will make a vry big name in dis field..... Ur just diff.. keep writing n expressing ur thoughts.. wil luv 2 read a lot more frm u...

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  7. @Dada ...
    Thanx for reading even in busy foreign shores ...
    As always u r my "First Reader" ...hehe

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  8. @Trisha ...
    Its your first official comment on my blogs ....thanx for reading sis !!!!
    You are one of the few people who would really know wat this very Topic means to me ...
    m Happy that my 'loved' ones have given it a read ...hehe ...keep track on the above link for more poems in future ...

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  9. @Dada ....(in bong) aamar naam aekhaane ektu formally neele thik hobe ...maane aamar actual naam ...hehe ....aeta ektu public platform hocche taai ... Keep watching this link ...ciao

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