LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL …
[Foreward : Can now say that I’m taking to poems just like a child does to a Cycle without side wheels for the first time …but its been a real good experience to start poetry last year and to grow with each publication on my Blog ..
So …I have dramatically reduced the Length of my Work ,thanks to reader’s (and non-reader’s) Feedback …
Here I present a refreshing account of a Day in Life of a common Young adult stacked up in the poem below … J]
When you wake up in the morning and notice the Sun has not Woken up
Your phone alarm rings !!! Oh, it never fails to chirp
You wake up and slowly start doing the chores
Have Tea, but your Eyes still partially Shut their Doors..
Realization then Slaps your mind’s Imagination
“Oh! Its another Day ..”, speaks your Apprehension.
But then your memory finally wakes up along with a List…
‘Things to do Today’, it reads, and your eyes can just see Mist.
Then when Realization finally packs a K.O. punch on your Nervous system…
“Oh No !! Another bugging day awaits ..”. You curse in Boredom.
All this above just makes you say …
Life is Boring ….if I’m wrong…you can claim …
You step out of your Home, Conscience storing the ‘List’…
You ‘Tick mark’ all you have done, but can’t keep track of what you Missed.
You wish your mind was a well written Computer Code …
Where things you have done would ‘Delete’ and Pending would ‘Load’
But all this Dissolves when someone somewhere ‘points a finger’ …
“You forgot to do this!!”, they say. Aah !! it hurts to be a Defaulter .
You then realize, afterall you have’nt committed a Crime…
‘cause to Err is Human, to Forgive divine .
Life is Boring …I stand by my Point …
The day then slowly wraps up …
With a few more Incidences till the Moon is set-up
Its time to Disconnect and take refuge in your home …
Afterall a House is not a Home, until the Rules are your Own.
Then again all Attention is concentrated to Imagination …
Conscience and Memory ‘team up’ to create a ‘Picture in motion’.
The whole day gone by Flashes in front of your Eyes …
Prominent instances of Criticism or an odd picture of some poor little guy.
But then suddenly there comes a Scene, which I swear, Money can’t buy ..
The Colourful picture of the Person you LOVE,
And your Heart ‘Skips a Beat’ and Breath ‘Gives a sigh’
Oh !! Thank You Creator !! Whether we Live or Die ..
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL !!!! Just give it a TRY …..
- SpunKo/PB
Hey...nice poem...first of all the topic is nice...becoz its a common man's daily life...this poem is really simple to understand at least for me...becoz u have used general english words..(my english is not as strong as u..i m from semi english medium.)..whole poem is very true..but i loved this line a lot..
ReplyDeleteAfterall a House is not a Home, until the Rules are your Own..
hey keep composing!
@Apoorva ...thanx a lot ...n hey !!! I dont have a good vocab ...n i always want it to be simple for everyone to understand ...but I still try to play with words in a few places just like the line you mentioned ("Afterall a house.....") ..
ReplyDeleteKeep reading...after a long time its someone other than my regular followers hwo has given the first comment ....keep reading (coz I dont read at all ..hehe)