HELL IS REAL !!!
[Foreward : SpunKo is back with “Dark” stuff …I feared I would wane if I completely Switched Off my dark mode …
Here I present Darkastic few lines in my own way … J ]
Death is now the peak …
Everyone seems to have become so weak …
Death in these places has surely risen above Theft .
Bombings ,Murders ,public outrage has taken over …
No one gets a chance anymore to enjoy the smell of a Flower .
Nuke deals are all that keep the Ministry BUSY …
Weapons are just a Decoy ,but arranging Cocktail parties become easy .
Suicide bombings mean just a 100 more lives lost …
Human life has almost become Cheaper than than rising petrol/litre cost .
Almost always all fingers point in the direction of OBAMA …
World becomes the Stage ,and his speeches no less than DRAMA .
But I don’t understand one thing at all …
Even after having the likes of Ambani’s ,Mallya’s ,Mittal’s at disposal .
Why does all financial aide come from personnel
Located at Wall Street or the Big Apple .
Miserliness has always been
Had we been more Miser in distributing Knowledge …
Never would have there been problem of National Funds .
Fuel mafia was forced to set a True man on Fire …
Yet Politicians were the ones who turned up to see his Funeral Pyre .
All roads now seem to have trapdoors of Death’s Cycle .
Even Accidents are no more limited to Land Vehicles …
‘cause you building may be subject to Crash of choppers.
So no more do I believe when people pray and seek entry into Heaven …
‘cause no matter whether you are a Sinner or a Saint ,
HELL is IN ,HELL is REAL … Wanna Bet ???
- PB/SpunKo
Good summary of all the Hell going on..
ReplyDeleteIn first para, Egypt and Theft are not rhymes..
Few spelling mistakes..
'cause you building may be subject to Crash of choppers' is presented very well..
Now next try to find some Heaven parts.. :)
@Abhijit ...yeah Egypt doesnt rhyme ...but one Rhyme missed would not matter until subject is relevant ...n Egypt crisis was BIG at that time....
ReplyDeleteSpellings will be rectifies for sure ....
n about Heaven ...as i have mentioned at the start this is a DARK poem ...so i get very small scope to Find heaven ...Surely heaven will be portrayed when I get time ....Another personal poem coming soon ... Thanx for reading !!!
One very important thing I forgot to mention is about the layout..
ReplyDeleteThe small font size + ITALIC on black bkg makes it difficult to read.. The words seems to be broken. It is as if reading a Dot Matrix print on PC..
I would recommend you to change the font size.
Slight increase in it will do.. just like your previous poem..
@Abhijit ...Sure !!!
ReplyDeleteLoved the flow , good writing , just a few more matured thoughts ! i m happy u arent pressing on the rhyme scheme forcibly !! :)
ReplyDelete@AJ ..Thanx a Lot .... This was my hand at a bit different kind of poem ...Thus I chose the at a stretch way ...n of course kept the theme Recent n Dark .... wait for my next one ...Its a total Personal one ..people close to me would surely relate ... :)
ReplyDeleteHey...the topic behind the poem is effective..!and nicely arranged poem..its really important to think upon this current situation mentioned in poem...and act accordingly!
ReplyDelete@Apoorva ...thanx ... Yeah ...there must be awareness now ... !!!!
ReplyDeleteThe World is no more a Safe place to live in ...We now have to rather SURVIVE !!!